Thursday, February 8, 2007

Writing assignment 4

Kaelyn: Long, blonde hair. Big, expressive, blue eyes. About 5'6". Very popular. Clothing style is Hollister, American Eagle, Aeropostale, etc. Talented. Prep and cheerleader. Lives in a small town somewhere and wants to leave. About 16. The kind of girl who's popular and perfect in everything (Or so it seems). The kind you can't help but be jealous of. Goes to the only high school in town.

Logan: Dark, Brown hair. Kinda long. Wears it covering one eye. Brown eyes. About 5'11" or 6'. Clothing style is Hot topic. Skateboarder. Lives in a big city. About 15 or 16. Doesn't get along with his parents at all, although they try to make him happy. Bit of a rebel. Kind of guy most girls are interested in but he doesn't care. Goes to a private school and doesn't like it.

2 comments:

Onilyn said...

Excellent descriptions. There is a good amount of both physical and pyschological development. Both types are necessary for characters that you and your reader will care about.

Onilyn said...

What is really great about your characters, is that you have the beginning of a conflict between them. Especially if they appear in the same story. Conflict helps character growth and story progression.